This is a mini-series of posts about making your consignment, resale, or thrift shop’s do what you want it to do:
to get shoppers into your actual, physical, bricks-&-mortar, REAL store.
Getting Internet visitors to actually come shopping is a goal not shared by the majority of web sites, perhaps: those sites where their customers do something on line (order, download, watch or listen) or sites which are simply “building a brand” (Ford, Coke, Crayola) rather than asking folks to step away from the electronics and come get physical. This is the challenge we’re examining in this mini-series. At the end of the week, we’ll have a self-help quiz which you can apply to your shop’s web site.
Today, we’re assuming that your current or potential client has seen your home page and wants .
to know more. Let’s take a look at the best way to present your “About” page.
Why? Because, besides the page your visitor landed on (your home page or any other page), the probabilities that they will click on “About Us” next are real close to 100%. So doesn’t it make sense to consider your “About Us” page as crucial? Let’s take a look at two consignment, resale, thrift shop sites and examine their “About Us” pages.
First up: Selective Seconds in Indiana. Selective Seconds actually has two “About Us” pages… each excellent in its own right. I would only suggest that the two pages be combined into one… even though a click doesn’t take up a millidecisixteenth-calorie, people prefer to press that click less. Vena’s two pages are http://www.selectiveseconds.com/our-story/ and
http://www.selectiveseconds.com/meet-the-staff/
See what you think.
(An aside here: Vena’s photo-portrait is one I often use to illustrate how a picture is worth 3000 words if you get 3 aspects into it: here’s Vena’s smiling face, her window lettering with name, phone, and mostly-visible hours, and the third aspect: an open door! (See yesterday’s post re “open”!) )
Another example: Camille’s Closet should really be Camilles’s Closet, for they are a mother-daughter team. This is a very appealing fact to play up, as they do on their “About Us” page… but a portrait or two of the team would go a long way in making the relationship a keystone of the way they do business… “I would tell my mom/ daughter honestly what she looks best in” could be the rallying call of their shop!
(Another aside: I do have a teeny issue with the wording: saying that they started the shop as a second choice after the first career went south, and that she grew up refusing to buy secondhand, are not choices I would highlight. But maybe I am just too close to the industry and “regular” people would be encouraged by this honesty. What do you think?)
Now, seven out of my 13 “volunteer” shop sites do not have any “About Us” page at all.
And three of the 6 shops which DO have an “About Us” present ad-speak about the shop, rather than a more local, warm, personable page that would give the future client a feel for what the personality of the shop is like. This might be fine, if you would rather remain impersonal and business-like. But can’t folks get THAT at Walmart? Why would they “shop local”… if they don’t
know and care about the people
they will encounter, the people who will help them, the people they could trust?
Here’s an “About Us” page for any retail business should contain, at the minimum:
- A photo of the owner and/or manager.
- That photo should be in the shop, with the shop name, hopefully, visible or added via a little photo fixing.
- That photo would be even better if the owner is interacting with other people.
- Don’t like photos of yourself? There are ways around that… hide behind the customer you’re helping, or even turn your back to the camera as you work.
- In addition to the photo: a few words indicating some things about the owner. This could be simple “cocktail party chatter” like Demi loves horses, and you’ll often see her wearing her consignment-shop prize find: a previously-loved Hermes scarf with their signature bridle bits on it!
So how does your “About Us” page stack up… or do you even have one? Should you? What would you say? Or do you disagree? Comment below, if you wish to discuss this further.
Read more:
How important is your business “About Us” page?
“About Us” Pages Are Hard But Important
Captivating (Non-Resale) “About Us” Pages
Ignore the video, read the words on this post.


Excellent read. I have a picture of myself but not in the shop so I’m going to have to work on that.
I have a love-hate relationship with your articles. They are always inspirational and then I have to add something to my To Do list like revamp my website!! haha
Yeh, a resale shopkeeper’s work is never done… well, at least it keeps us out of the bars (and concerts and picnics and boating excursions …)
[…] Delving Deeper […]
[…] Comments « Optimizing your Web Site for Resale Shoppers, Day Two: Delving Deeper […]